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Help with a translation!

24VICTORIA
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Help with a translation!
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Can somebody help me with this translation. I need it for a friend of mine and I thinkit does not sound like perfect English.
Thanks a lot and have a nice day, Victoria
Next, it is described the churches and the musical activity developed
there during the chronology that the article comprises. /Next, the
churches and the musical activity developed there during the chronology
that the article comprises are described.
Which one is better?
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22 Oct 2009
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mblack977
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Hi Victoria
Both sentences are not really correct but i think you want the second one with a couple of changes.
�Next, the article describes the development of the churches and music that took place during the period �
hope this helps
Matt |
22 Oct 2009
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