ESL Forum:
Techniques and methods
in Language Teaching
Games, activities
and teaching ideas
Grammar and
Linguistics
Teaching material
Concerning
worksheets
Concerning
powerpoints
Concerning online
exercises
Make suggestions,
report errors
Ask for help
Message board
|
ESL forum >
Message board > HELP ME PLEASE WITH MY DISSERTATION
HELP ME PLEASE WITH MY DISSERTATION
teacherkatia
|
HELP ME PLEASE WITH MY DISSERTATION
|
Hi teachers...
I need some help... it�s about the abstract of my dissestation.
Could someone read and tell me if there are something wrong?
Tks a lot
This dissertation analyzed the building process of National Curricular Guidelines for the Pedagogy Graduation Courses in Brazil establish by Resolution of the National Education Council � n. 01, May 15th 2006, from the identification of some ambiguities on texts written by the representatives of different historical projects which dispute the concept of pedagogy and the proposal of the training pedagogue on the referenced elaboration process. |
19 Apr 2010
|
|
|
doroteia
|
Dear, If I were to write this I would write like this:
This present dissertation has analyzed the process of construction of National Curricular Guidelines for Pedagogy Graduation Courses in Brazil established by the Resolution of the National Education Council � number 01, on May 15th 2006, from the identification of some ambiguities on texts written by the representatives of different historical projects which dispute the concept of pedagogy and the proposal of the training pedagogue professionsal (?) on the above mentioned process.
Look, but this is just my humble suggestion and I �m just trying to help, ok? |
19 Apr 2010
|
|
mcolon
|
I �d write this present dissertation presents an analysis... The new APA approach does not reccomend the use of passive voice. Besides, the dissertation does not analyze anything, it is ths authot who has analyzed the issues.
Hope this may be of help! |
19 Apr 2010
|
|
teacherkatia
|
Thanks for all the suggestions...
I will post the ready abstract... so you can help me with the rest.
Tks a lot!!! |
19 Apr 2010
|
|
|