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Ask for help > COULD YOU CORRECT IT FOR ME,PLEASE?
COULD YOU CORRECT IT FOR ME,PLEASE?
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mary-butterfly
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COULD YOU CORRECT IT FOR ME,PLEASE?
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I HAD TO TRANSLATE THIS AND I DON �T KNOW IF SOME PARTS ARE RIGHT.CAN YOU TAKE A LOOK FOR ME PLEASE?
"After a Marxism incursion about a transformation of labor time in money,in which it tried to explain through of the value of goods" workforce" how occurs the creation of profit- either through of quantification or qualification of the dedicate time- beyond to talk about the labor time nowadays,relating this as factor structuring social life.... ...........thus,it intends to configure the ambivalent nature of the suggested measure here. that the expected result not only reflects the creation of the new jobs,but also offers conditions for the continuous functionality of the capitalist system.
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21 Apr 2010
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Olindalima ( F )
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Hi Mary
This is a little confusing, I think. what about sending the text in Portuguese, too? I think many of us would reach to a better translation.
kisses
linda
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22 Apr 2010
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Apodo
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Very confusing indeed! (and I �m a native English speaker)
It is very hard to tell from this translation exactly what the author intended. It needs to be completely re-written. I �m sure someone will help with a better translation. |
22 Apr 2010
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PhilipR
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The English translation is Chinese to me. 
Shorter sentences, fewer nouns and a complete rewrite are in order.
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22 Apr 2010
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