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vlay
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Help please
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Hello every boby:
I would like you to help me please. I wrote this composition and I want to be completely sure if it�s perfect. Maybe you can make some corrections please. I�ll really appreaciate your help.
Thanks in advance.
Dear Caroline:
I�m very interested in applying for that language subject. Can you tell me when the course starts and what I need to get a vacancy?.
I think it�s an excellent idea for me to study with foreign teachers and partners from all over the world, also I �d like to take some grammar and conversation courses because they are very important to develop my profession in my country.
These days, I don�t have much money, could you tell me how much the educational summer camp would cost? because I need to work harder than now to get some extra money.
I appreciate you organize the trip together, thanks for that and I �d prefer to visit the Great Barrier Reef because I visited Australia desert two years ago and I �d like a completely new experience.
Many thanks for your help and I�m looking forward to hearing from you soo.
Best wishes.
Victor Lay
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15 Dec 2010
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treasure0911
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Hi!
It looks good except a few things I do not really understand or I would improve:
"that language subject" is that a camp?
Can you
tell me when the course starts and what I need to get a vacancy?. ??????
... also (moreover) I �d like to take
some grammar and conversation courses
I appreciate you organize the trip together, ??????
Many thanks for your help and I�m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Hope it helps!
You �re so lucky to go to Australia!
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15 Dec 2010
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ballycastle1
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Hi Victor, Without changing your letter too much, something like this would fit the bill:
Dear Caroline,
I�m very interested in applying for the educational summer camp in Australia. Can you tell me when the camp starts and how to apply?
I think it�s an excellent idea for me to study with foreign teachers and partners from all over the world. Given the choice, I would prefer to visit the Great Barrier Reef because I visited the Australian desert two years ago and I �d like a completely new experience. I�d also like to take additional courses in grammar and conversation because they will help my professional development when I return home.
Could you tell me how much the camp will cost? As finances are rather tight at the moment, I am sure that I will need to take on additional work to make some extra money.
Thank you for organizing the trip and for all your help. I�m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Victor Lay |
15 Dec 2010
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vlay
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Thanks for your answers , I know that here I can find wonderful people who always help and give their valuable point of view.Thanks. |
16 Dec 2010
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