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caren_630
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Need help in editing writing
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Dear colleagues, As I was correcting my students the mid term exam, I faced a sentence which I could not edit. Will someone please help me in editing it?!! The student sentence: Bundy, the alien, gave Harry and Tim some candy. Bundy put some sleeping poison before giving it to them. |
7 Nov 2011
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Apodo
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Bundy, the alien, gave Harry and Tim some candy. Bundy put some sleeping poison in the candy before giving it to them.
Bundy, the alien, gave Harry and Tim some candy, but he put some sleeping poison in the candy before giving it to them.
Bundy, the alien, gave Harry and Tim some candy laced with a sleeping potion.
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7 Nov 2011
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