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help: rewriting a paragraph

gloriawpai
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help: rewriting a paragraph
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How should I correct this paragraph?
Governments are trying to ban smoking from public closed places. This
can be justified by several reasons, all supported on health arguments. There is also a concern with the preventive medicine, which
simply avoids negative habits that will eventually harm the
patient �s health. Fact never before observed, since medicine was a science only used to
heal illnesses, not to prevent them.
Thanks!!
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16 Nov 2011
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Jayho
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Here are my midnight thoughts Gloria
Governments are trying to ban smoking from in enclosed public closed places. This can be justified by several reasons, all supported on by/with health arguments. There is also a concern with [or �in relation to �] the preventive medicine, which simply avoids negative habits that will eventually harm the a patient�s health. This is a fact never before observed, since medicine was [considered] a science only used to heal illnesses, not to prevent them.
Cheers
Jayho |
16 Nov 2011
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gloriawpai
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Thanks a zillion, dear Jayho.
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16 Nov 2011
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