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Help with the sentences
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dackala
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Help with the sentences
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Dear friends, I need some help with the following sentences as I don �t know if they sound correct. It �s about some kind an advertisement for my friend: - Professional drivers who speak foreign languages.
- Transport from your desired address in Serbia or abroad
- Vehicle rental with hiring a driver for 12h, 24h or several days.
- At your service 24/7
- Price is per vehicle
- The price does not include payment of tools.
Thanks in advance,
Darija
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18 May 2015
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Apodo
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- Professional drivers with foreign language skills
- Transport from your desired address in Serbia or abroad
- Vehicle rental with chauffeur for 12h, 24h or several days
- At your service 24/7
- Price is per vehicle
- The price does not include payment of tools???
I don�t understand number 6. Can you explain as there may be a better way to write this.
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18 May 2015
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redcamarocruiser
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I had the same question about number 6. Is this an advertisement looking for drivers/chauffeurs, or is it an advertisement offering a driving service to customers (limosine service), or is it an ad looking for business customers who need their goods transported to stores, market (or other locations), or is it an ad looking for truck drivers to transport goods? If it is for drivers, then they may be required to purchase or rent tools (crowbar etc. for changing tires, changing oil etc).
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18 May 2015
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dackala
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Thanks a lot for your answers!! It �s for ad offering a driving service to customers like, just a car nothing specified. When you need to rent a car he is the one who will offer you one, or if you don �t want to drive you can get a chauffeur instead. It doesn �t matter if it �s for business purposes or a �private � trip.
for the last one 6. there was one mistake I made- I actually meant : extra charge for toll. Can I say : There is an extra charge for toll?
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19 May 2015
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redcamarocruiser
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There is an extra charge for all tolls. There is an extra charge for any tolls. . There is an extra charge for tolls. |
19 May 2015
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dackala
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Thanks redcamarocruiser once again! |
19 May 2015
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Apodo
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As the list doesn �t specify you can rent and drive yourself, maybe put Number 3 first with the wording: - Vehicle rental with chauffeur or self-drive for 12h, 24h or several days
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19 May 2015
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dackala
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You �re right Apodo, that �s exactly what should be written. Thanks a lot! |
20 May 2015
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