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Help with a sentence

LenaMar
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Help with a sentence
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I need your help please because I read this so many times that I am confused. I am reading a thesis for a friend and I have this sentence that doesn �t sound good at all It was used existing radiographic records at the university - it�s a Dentistry university and the radiographic records were used in this study. Can you help please?
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29 Aug 2015
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ueslteacher
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The sentence is definitely off. The correct versions could run as follows: They used the existing university radiographic records. At the university they used the existing radiographic records. The existing radiographic records were used at the university. |
29 Aug 2015
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LenaMar
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Yes, but as it is a thesis I am not sure if it can start with "They used". I already correct it to your last one too but would like more suggestions. Thanks :)
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29 Aug 2015
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tancredo
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I would say: There used to be radiographic records at the library. |
29 Aug 2015
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yanogator
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I agree with Sophia �s last sentence, except I would omit "The". Existing radiographic records were used at the university. What is the original sentence in Portuguese? Bruce |
29 Aug 2015
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LenaMar
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I only got the text in English, Bruce. It is not easy because it �s a technical text regarding partial dentures :( Thanks
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29 Aug 2015
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redcamarocruiser
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"Existing radiographic records at the university were used" is the best sounding sentence, as Bruce and Sophie said. |
29 Aug 2015
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LenaMar
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Ok, it �s done Thanks for your help :) |
29 Aug 2015
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cunliffe
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Or �what was used were existing records at the university. � This emphasises that fact a little and keeps the passive. |
30 Aug 2015
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