Dear Native speakers and colleagues,

 

I �m writing my essay to get a scholarship to go to America for 5 weeks. Could you help me to improve my essay on content and grammar. The death line is midnight of 19 May 2016.  Here is my essay!

 

3. What will you contribute to the YSEALI Fellowship 100 words

   As my experience that I would get from this program, I’ll be a good counselor and better idol for my younger people in my university and community. Making a training camp about civic engagement for youths to enable them to be good ASEAN citizenship is a good plan that I desire to do after the program. Especially, to participate or able to be an assistant to help the YSEALI to manage the developing or training camps ,for example, the Uncle Sam camp that I’d ever taken part in before is what I also can contribute to the fellowship.

 

The experience that I would receive from this program would help me become a better counselor and role model for the younger people in my community and university.  My goal is to create my own camp to train youth on civic engagement and enable them to be good ASEAN citizens.  To participate in the YSEALI Fellowship would mentor me on how to manage and develop my own training camp, especially the Uncle Sam camp as I have never participated in anything like that before.

 

Hopefully that helps you.  Also we don �t say death line, it �s "deadline".  Good luck.