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ep89za
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However, the sentence was a little difficult to understand and I needed to read it more than once. Perhaps it �s only me. Nevertheless, here is a thought: since the sensitivity of PCs is a factor influencing spatial resolution, could you just write "the aim of this study was to improve the performance of parallel hole collimators (PCs), whose sensitivity is proportionally (or inversely proportionally?) associated with degradation of spatial resolution." ?
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15 Jul 2016
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yanogator
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I somewhat agree with ep89za in that, although I understood the sentence, even the first option offered in the original post has not sounded entirely correct from the beginning. I think her suggestion, or something similar, would be better. Bruce |
15 Jul 2016
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