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Writing Tips Wanted!

Miss_Alel�
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Writing Tips Wanted!
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Hello friends, I hope you are doing well here at ESLprintables.
This time I bother you to ask for help. See, I am writing an essay on the following rubric "teaching teenagers is not an easy job" Do you agree?
But I feel like there �s something missing to my introduction to make it more catching... Your suggestions are welcomed... here goes what I have so far.
During my years as a teacher-to-be, I have been told that adolescence is the most difficult period in the lifetime of a human being, a period of great changes as regards physical and psychological developments. Therefore, though I do not claim to be an expert, it seems to me that there is every reason to believe that teaching teenagers is not an easy job.
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10 Jun 2009
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anitarobi
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10 Jun 2009
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Carla Horne
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Hi,
How formal does the essay need to be? You may want to begin with a question like the following:
Where else is it possible to observe teenagers be pensive, grumpy, argumentative, repentant, and loving all in ninety minutes? The answer is a classroom. of course.
This just could be your "hook" for your reader. I would also wrte " a period of great change in regard to..."
I hope this helps.
Carla
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10 Jun 2009
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